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This is a little bit of a rewrite of a song by a band called Linkin Park. The song is called "With You" and it is dedicated to MM77. I have taken a bit of liberal license, so here it goes:
We woke up in a dream today
To the cold of the static/And put down cold feet on the floor
Forgot all about yesterday
Remembering we wondering why you're not here anymore
A little taste of diplomacy
And we're left in the wake from your abscence, so slow to react
Even though you're so important to us
You've somehow become distant, and we want to bring you back
It true, the way we feel
Was promised by your voice
The sight of your words
Painted on our memories
Even if you're not with us
We're with you
You, now we see, returning to us from the dark
You, now we see, we can open up our eyes
We read your posts, and you read back
We fall to the floor laughing, the rest of the day stand still
Fine line between the present and the past
When things went wrong, we pretend that the present isn't real
And then we were trapped in your memory
And we were left with our mistake, so slow to react
Even though you're so important to us
You've somehow become distant, and we want to bring you back
It true, the way we feel
Was promised by your voice
The sight of your words
Painted on my memories
Even if you're not with us
We're with you
You, now we see, returning to us from the dark
You, now we see, we can open up our eyes
No
No matter how far we strayed
We can't wait to see tomorrow
With you
You, now we see, returning to us from the dark
You, now we see, we can open up our eyes
You, now we see, returning to us from the dark
You, now we see, we can open up our eyes
(Song fades off into the distance)
So MM77 and fellow fanclubbers, what do you think? First try.
        
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Glad you like it MM77. I am a big Linkin Park fan too, Meteora never leaves my car's CD player. And you know the original so you can sing along! 
Look forward to reading the stories.
And you know we would never leave. 
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#333
by Veteran MM77 - 3/30/2004 7:01:11 PM
I have Meteora in my hands right now unwraped.
Im wating for a weekend ALONE! So I can BLAST! The HELL! OUT OF IT! (sigh) 
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Yep. That CD deserves a very good speaker system.
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#337
by Veteran MM77 - 3/31/2004 8:50:48 PM
Exar Kuun,
Thank you. 
I HOPE YOU STILL feel that way AFTER I POST my next story of.
GODS OF ANOTHER UNIVERSE 
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#339
by Veteran MM77 - 3/31/2004 9:25:17 PM
A.S.A.P.
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Yeah, MM77, stop warning us about it, and show us it! 
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#341
by Veteran MM77 - 3/31/2004 9:53:40 PM
By the way if anyone has questions about the story so far ask now or you may get MORE CONFUSED!
It's almost done about 3 chapters to go there 9 done
[Message Edited]
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#342
by Veteran MM77 - 4/1/2004 1:28:10 AM
************ GODS OF ANOTHER UNIVERSE *************
CHAPTER 22: THE CANDYMAN
( POUR SOME SUGAR ME by DEF LEOPARD )
( KitWarrior has just revived The godling )
The godling: I exist!?.......What am I!?.........Why am I!?.......Where am I!?.......
KitWarrior: Easy old friend......
Your MM..I mean your the SENTINEL of CARIELF
You have been SLAINED TWICE!
The godling: Something is not right with me....I have multi personalities fighting inside me full with LIFE TIMES of experiences.
KitWarrior: One must be MM77 he was the FIRST SENTINEL of CARIELF.
The other must be the godling that died by LORD MM77'S BLADES.
Seeing how your spirit was traped in them you never really died but you were getting scramble because you have not lived long enough as The godling for your personality to solify.
The godling: Do the people here on CARIELF know MM77 is dead?
KitWarrior: NO. In there time line MM77 would have been dead for 3 minutes 48 seconds
The godling: Good I will take the spirit and essence of MM77 out of me so CARIELF will have it's SENTINEL.
And I can FIND MYSELF!
( With that The godling extend his arms and LIFE was TANSFERED INTO MM77 )
MM77: ------ mommy ------ mommy ------ MAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
KitWarrior: CALM DOWN! Your mother is.....
MM77: MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! YOU KNOW WHERE MY MOTHER IS YOU DIE NOW!!!!
( The POWER of the DEMIGOD Was not somthing the ARCHANGEL OR The godling wanted to deal with in the godling's weakened state. )
( MM77 pins the archangel and godling against the TEMPLE WALLS with power beyond words. )
KitWarrior:..gasp...arr.hu..your...mother...is....dead..gasp...the godling...freed...her...from..lord..mm77's...BLADES!
( MM77 drops them )
MM77: FREED!?
KitWarrior: Yes FREED. her SPIRIT is now in the REALM That some call HEAVEN!
MM77: FREED!?.....HEAVEN!?........
( With concerned looks on thair faces thay look to eachother then to MM77! )
MM77: SHE'S DEAD! My MOTHERS DEAD!
YES!!! MOTHERS DEAD! YIPPPPPPPPPPPY!!!
I'M so HAPPY I COULD SING FOREVER!!!
LET'S ROCK! LET'S ROLL! MM77 LOST CONTROL!.. ...
YOU! Over THERE!
Don't be no FREAKING SQUARE!
We got the music JAMMING!
Nobody has a CARE!.........
I love YOU
YOU love ME
WERE a HAPPY FAMILY!
From the STARDOCK TEMPLES!
To the PLANET CARIELF......
KitWarrior: Godling! You gotta do something!
He's WORST! Then BEFORE!
( The godling tranfers MM77 to his station )
The godling: I had no IDEA! HOW obnoxious I could BE!
KitWarrior:..er..at times....
The godling: Well IM GLAD THAT! Part of me is gone.
KitWarrior:..aah..we'll see.....
( KitWarrior looks at the godling but the godling LOOKS DIFFERENT! )
KitWarrior:..Whats happening to YOU!?
You look DIFFERENT!
The godling: People viewing me see me differently with CHANGE......Some will see me as a ANDROID like being while other's see me as 77M&M or THE CANDYMAN! While other will see me as HUMANOID, As you are NOW.
Now we must get to work we'll need Exar Kuun and Hurley
KitWarrior:..But what can a JEDI and a PENGUIN do for a godling
The godling: In time....Summon them hear now I must save my STRENTH.
( With that KitWarrior retrieves them in seconds )
Exar Kuun: How did I get HERE!
Hurley: NOT AGAIN!
The godling: Hurley I need you to KEEP tabs on MM77 I won't be here and your intel is second to none.
Exar Kuun, I need you to speak to tne EVIL ONE! For me.
Exar Kuun: But I though he was but a LEGEND!
The godling: No....I'm sorry to say...But...
LORD EVIL STEVE!.... EXISTS!
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CHAPTER 23: THE QUEST
CRY by MM77
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
( Elsewhere )
TV announcer: Ma'am, How would YOU like to win a FREE MUSIC POD!
Lady: OH! ..GREAT!!
TV announcer: All you have to do Ma'am.
Is tell me, Who is the SENTINEL of CARIELF...you have 60 seconds.......
( Back in the Temple, KitWarrior leaves with Hurley. )
The godling: Give this steel ball to LORD EVIL STEVE.
it will speak for me.
Exar Kuun: Uh.....Why don't you go there yourself.
The godling: As I said I won't be here and LORD EVIL STEVE may kill me
Exar Kuun: He may KILL ME!
The godling: I have a lock on you if you die you will reapear in the JEDI TEMPEL.
Exar Kuun: I sence your words are true. It is a honor to serve the HOLY TEMPLE.
( The godling opens a portal to LORD EVIL STEVE'S UNIVERSE and sends Exar kunn through. )
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CHAPTER 24:OH MANDY
( Exar Kunn appears in front of LORD EVIL STEVE )
LORD EVIL STEVE : The SHEEEEEEEEEEEP iz grazing
And wez heading down da line
Evil Steve iz comming
To da Sheep's from for BEHIND!
iz not i ewe is krazy!
iz i ewe is mad!......Mad about dem SHEEP!.....
Why are you hear little Sheep.
Exar Kunn: I have brought a massage to you from The godling.
( LORD EVIL STEVE takes the steel ball and LAUGHS OUT! )
LORD EVIL STEVE :You GOT TO be KIDDING!!!
( LORD EVIL STEVE swallows the steel ball and SMILES! )
( Exar Kunn takes a step back to enter the portal but LORD EVIL STEVE holds him in locked field.)
Exar Kunn: I am just delivering a massage I MUST BE GOING!
LORD EVIL STEVE : i don't meanz to be rude, u gave me something i give u something.
let'z PARTY!!
( And with that MANDY by BARRRY MANTILO starts to PLAY! )
Exar Kunn: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
LORD EVIL STEVE : Perhaps i will try da Kuun delight!
Exar Kunn: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
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CHAPTER 25: A FATHER AND SON REUNION
THE SHOW MUST GO ON by PINK FLOYD
( The godling opens a portal to LORD MM77 UNIVERSE. Time seems ENDLESS as The godling and LORD MM77 stare into eachothers SOULS )
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CHAPTER 26: THE INVITATION
LET IT BE by THE BEATELS
GOD FROGBOY: We have recived an invatation to LORD EVIL STEVE'S UNIVERSE.
I FEEL we have all been working hard to long and NOW is the TIME!... To lighting up and mingle with our neighbors.
GOD BOOGIE BAC: Why LORD EVIL STEVE'S UNIVERSE!?
GOD FROGBOY: Why NOT!?....Beside he the only other GOD of ANOTHER UNIVERSE to seed us a INVITE.
GOD T-MAN: What about the GODDESS CARIELF
GODDESS MOMZILLA: Are you kidding!?.....and pull here from the TEMPLE!? .......FAT CHANCE!
GODDESS KARMAGIRL: LET'S GO!
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CHAPTER 27: LORD EVIL STEVE
IN THE END by LINKIN PARK
LORD EVIL STEVE : i iz pleased u come!... all of u!
GOD FROGBOY: Yes I felt it was time to exchange philosophies.
To gane a new SPARK on life.
LORD EVIL STEVE : Yes a new SPARK! iz what i iz thinkin TO!
( And WITH THAT! LORD EVIL STEVE! Seals in the Goddess and Gods )
GOD FROGBOY: I don't like jokes please stop that is rude!
LORD EVIL STEVE : i iz rude true but no joke. (smile)
GOD FROGBOY: STUPID GOD! YOU WILL SPEND ALL! Your resources in this universe trying to hold us. And when thay our gone. Will LEAVE YOU to YOUR NOTHINGNESS. And if you try to KILLS us we will evolves into STRONGER GODS and GODDESS and DESTROY YOU PERMANENTLY!!!
THIS IS YOUR ONLY WARNNING!!!
LORD EVIL STEVE : u iz wrong i iz not stupid. You iz FOOLISH!!!
You haz all da worshipers any GOD and GODDESS COULD WANT!
But u haz no time to say hi to dem......to busy.....
Well that is da weakness of all Gods and Goddess
no worshipers no belife no GODS!!!........
ask the Greek and Roman GODS!.....if u could find dem!
if a tree falls in da forest and no life is der to hear it fall
dose it make a sound!?..........we will see..........
u WILL DIE! but u won't fuse with MY UNIVERSE!!!
( Just then LORD MM77 ENTERS!!! )
LORD MM77: MY BLADES THIRSTS FOR BLOOD!!!
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CHAPTER 28: ALL FALL DOWN!
GOOD BYE! PART 1 & 2 by MM77
GOD FROGBOY: ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!..ATTACK!!!!!
LORD MM77: On the eve
of death and greed.
Soldiers die
And childen bleed.
It's no lie
We have our needs.
You may come
And you may fall.
You may die
I saw it all.
It's not a lie
Your going to fall.
You think your GODS
Can save you now.
You think thier love
will spear you all.
Your GODS are DEAD!
It's not a lie
I KILLED THEM ALL!!!
SWHISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSH
GOD FROGBOY: Somethings in the air
The air is THICK!
It's hard to breath
I'm getting sick.
Tears in my eyes
I start to cry.
It's just to much
I'm going to die.
You may laugh
And I may cry.
Your filled with HATE!
And thats no lie.
I wish you were DEAD!
And now I die.
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLIPPPPPPPPPPP!
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CHAPTER 29: THE GODLING TEMPLE
CRY PART 1 & 2 by MM77
The godling: Goddess CariElf. LORD MM77 has SLAIN ALL of the TEMPLE GODS and GODDESS.
( The Goddess CariElf looks into the soul of The godling )
Goddess CariElf: Then I have NO CHOISE but to see LORD MM77.
( The Goddess CariElf opens a portal to LORD MM77'S UNIVERSE and is gone. )
( The godling summons MM77 infront of him )
The godling: Time to bring you up to speed. Your to serve ME NOW!
( The DEMIGOD FIGHTS AS HARD AS HE CAN BUT IS SMOOTHER! )
The godling: WAIT WATCH and CRY
WAIT WATCH and CRY
WAIT WATCH and CRY
WAIT WATCH and CRY
Let's see you dance
I must watch
As you start to DIE!
MM77: Just one thing
I want to KNOW!
What gotting into
YOUR DARK SOUL!
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CHAPTER 30: LIES
TRUTH PART 1 & 2 by MM77
Goddess CariElf: IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Know what you WHANT.
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Know your FEARS.
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Know your HATE.
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Know your PASSIONS.
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Know your TRUTHS.
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Know your WEAKNESS.
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Know your DEATH!
LORD MM77: LOVES is killed by HATE!
TRUTH is just a LIE!
CARE is your WEAKNESS!
HONOR is a CRIME!
YOU THINK I'M LYING!
WHY DO YOU CRY!?
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CHAPTER 31: GOOD BYE
CRY PART 3
WAIT WATCH and CRY
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
WAIT WATCH and CRY
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
WAIT WATCH and CRY
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
WAIT WATCH and CRY
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH AHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Lady: MM77
TV announcer: YOU JUST WON A BRAND NEW MUISC POD!!!
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#347
by Veteran MM77 - 4/1/2004 9:20:07 PM
************ GODS OF ANOTHER UNIVERSE *************
CHAPTER 32: LORD TYRANT
CRY PART 5 by MM77
The godling: From THIS moment on I shall be knowed as LORD TYRANT.
And I shall RULE with an IRON FIST!
LORD EVIL STEVE: we shall rulez together!
( As he looks at LORD TYRANT )
( LORD TYRANT Looks at LORD EVIL STEVE )
LORD EVIL STEVE: even a GOD like u sill needz someone to look after yourz back! ( smile )
By da wayz...were da SHEEP!
LORD TYRANT: Everybody I'm your FREND!
WAIT! WATCH! and CRY!
And YOU WILL LOVE ME till the END!
WAIT! WATCH! and CRY!
I SWEAR to GOD I do not LIE!
WAIT! WATCH! and CRY!
Stick with ME I'm by your SIDE!
WAIT! WATCH! and CRY!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I'M SOMEONE you can DEPEND ON!
WAIT! WATCH! and CRY!
As you see I REALLY CARE!
WAIT! WATCH! and CRY!
REVOLUTION in the AIR!
WAIT! WATCH! and CRY!
THOSE other GODS thay never CARED!
WAIT! WATCH! and CRY!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
LADY: OH!...THANK TYRANT!....I REALLY NEED a NEW MUSIC POD!!!
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Good stuff MM77! Enjoy reading it. It had been so long, I had to go back and read the earlier chapters to remember it.
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